AmeriCa Audio #!111

[Spookify]

Lol first audio (orc mirror) ;) hope you enjoy..chances are you wont learn anything but thats ok ;) :crazy: :naughty: :censored: on smerf iPods :)

AmeriCa Audio 1 (http://dl2.rapidshare.de/files/1650836/7648116/AmeriCa_Audio_1.zip)

[Grommash]

U know this AC was great overall, thx for putting ur time into doing it. =)

Here is a lil tip for you though: don't start ur way as an AC'er by doing Mirrors since it requiers a lot of skill which u would probably have later on.

Gj. ^^

[Spookify]

lol thanks man, it means alot ;) but yea thats the only replay I really had after losing alot after reinstalling but I greatly appreciate the feedback :D

[Dakonblackblade]

Gj first and thx for your work.
Now some comments.Im guessing you r not so familiar with english (maybe my mistake) because u say always ''you know'' which is a bit awkward.Well its ok to not be good in english (im not) .U dont have to sound like american or something or talk fast and with an accent,we just need your coments.
The next coments is very important and not only 4 u but 4 the rest of the guys and pls dont take me wrong.It seems we forget the essence of ac by not telling why we do something.Of course u describe the units and the counters and so but that its just all well known(but not bad mentioning).I guess a better replay with more details (explaining creep pattern ,intuitions on scouting,hero choices even strange ones,base constructions etc.) would be much better.And thats why i think u should try a high lvl replay.Of course commenting yours its easier so maybe try commenting these actions too in your replays, even small ones.Also try to comment more thoroughly the enemies mistakes.Its something that few people do.For example i think his base was poorly built.Id like to hear your opinion on that(u mentioned the shop but i think there was much more)and it didnt sound like an actuall comment.The action on this replay was a little poor ,meaning that not much happened(2-3 battles a little chasing and over).You could even describe numerical factors as dmg reduction etc.I guess there are many more but you will figure them out.
Sorry if i sound a little harsh.Your work is much appreciated by me and take my words as ideas and proposals and not mistakes.Looking forward to listen to your next replay which will be better ,im sure.Those words go and to the other guys who make acs .
And do u think i need to type more ',' in sentences?

[Spookify]

lawl thanks for the feedback :) i just did the ac on a whim..wwait..how do u spell that..let me google it..ok..i guess thats right, anway yea thanks for the feedback i just kinda tried to put in what i like in a commentery which is for some reason more random crap then commentery :curious: go figure but yea i will eventually get into specifics for certain replays and such and again thanks

[BlackRiderz]

Good job overall,Next time If I were you I would find an audio that has a specific strategy and study it, then do an audio on that replay.To me it seems easier to do audios on other games than your own games becasue sometimes your not watching(like you said) and sometimes you have no clue wth your doing,lol.I would know :happy:.as stated above me you do say "you know" and "like" a lot too.

[Spookify]

Haha yea i was listening to it and I do say that alot lol so next audio im going to like point it out everytime i say it and stuff to see if I can prevent it just cuz its something to do :lol: anyway thanks for feedback

[DrZaP84]

Hey america nice job, not bad for a first time audio. Some suggestions would be, to not say ya know, but riderz already pointed that out. Also, you did well filling in spaces where there was nothing to commentate on. Overall nice job, a little short, but that can't be helped, it was just a short game ^^ Nice job, keep them coming.

[Spookify]

thanks bro :D i encourage all who download to feedback :) holy crap ive had alot of spare time today for wcr..ug..:( tomorrows skool

[Violence]

#11 and #12 was better. Still good stuff though :)

[thegame]

Nice audio. Btw, i dont think there is anything wrong with saying 'you know' 48431468434 times, its just a general thing many people are used to saying and i dont find it annoying, i wouldnt even have noticed it if other members hadn't mentioned =P