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DiMeNsiOn
03-12-2004, 11:09 AM
Chapter One: Black

It was dark in Baranar's forest that night. The light of the two moons crept past the swishing leaves and swaying branches. A calm breeze inched by limbs of trees and the fur of sleeping animals. Sticks crumbled under the rigid paws of tree boars and nocturnal mammals. And there was no sight or sound of man . . .

Amongst the trees, there existed a treacherous creature. Glistening beams shone upon his hair, revealing branch-like dreads reaching out to his shoulder and back. Leaves parted from his dirty locks that draped randomly into his face. His bronzed skin flaked like bark from a dying tree. Each of his limbs seemed to be several roots spiraling unsystematically, until they reached their destination to shape great hands. Was this a beast or a fully animated tree with capabilities of butchery? Regardless, the townspeople that feared him also chose to give him the name of Leif.

He watched over the woodlands, protecting the foliage from the fiends he hated most . . . Men. With his eyes grazing over the darkened forest, his hands guided a precious stone along the edges of his only companion, his axe. It was the only weapon suitable for Leif’s size, which was larger than life itself. Two black branches weaved maliciously to form the staff of the axe and ultimately grind into the blade as if the wood were metal itself. Leif labeled this instrument of pain the Reaper, for all the deaths it has dealt.

The moons needed to rest for the next rise. Leif’s dry eyelids fell limply as his body fell. While the remainder of his body slept, his hand sustained a clenching grip upon the handle of the Reaper, preparing for wanderers and unwelcome company.

As the town cast its forty winks, an inquisitive boy sauntered blindly through the final hours of darkness. While a yawn leisurely slithered out of his lips, the child carelessly meandered into the forest that his parents continuously forewarned him to avoid. But all beliefs eluded him that night.

The Keeper of the Woods felt each yielding footstep the child took into the forest. The thick odor of a child’s happiness dripped off of Leif’s nose as he noiselessly drifted passed the lush surroundings. With every arctic breath the boy released, Leif treaded closer. Brittle vegetation screamed silently with every skull shredding step. As he hung his brutal axe harshly to his side, Leif bent about a dying tree, curling around every fragmented slice of bark while staring at his intruder.

The crackle of a snapping twig petrified the child; his paused feet could not have made such a horrific sound. He forced himself to believe that it was his father, searching for him. But the antagonized footsteps proved otherwise. “Barret, come back home!” He thought he heard his father weep.

An unfamiliar voice struck the boy’s hair upon his neck. Glacial trembling sweat trickled down his vertebrae. The language was similar, but the child had never heard such a low, vicious growl come from any of the townspeople.

"Fear the Reaper. . ." Those words whispered into the boy’s ears like a dying heartbeat of a little girl. The child knew it was too late for regrets as his timid body cringed at the stories he heard about the Keeper of the Woods. In an effort to relieve himself, the son of a farmer screamed a thousand screams. A hollow thud crashing into the rotting leaves followed the cries for help. The headless remains plummeted to the ground as syrupy blood flooded Dio’s earth. Tree-like roots ripped out from the head wound as the corpse twitched frantically, becoming a part of the forest.

Leif lazily went back to his slumber to rest his elemental essence.

Mercu summoned the great sun to shine upon the magnificent world of Fou Lu. Birds sang divine hymns to welcome the warmth and light. And then, the eyes of the Guardian opened. The loveliness of day faded. Clouds covered the blinding star.
Growling and shivering gnarls surged into Leif’s grimy ears. Slowly snapping his neck into an awkward but comfortable position, the Keeper peeked in at the curious rustle. There were two bizarre animals fighting one another.

The larger of the two leaped onto his hind legs, snatching his commanding jaws in a flowing movement. Small, pointed horns swelled out from the jaw symmetrically. When he landed upon his vigorous appendages, he could have been measured at six feet to his spine. His overflowing black fur swayed in every direction he turned. Another bellow emanated from its fury, echoing across the vast forest, while his raw wounds pleaded to heal.

A swift gray mammal bounced effortlessly across the dirt on its back legs. While swinging at the giant beast with its spear shaped limbs, froth collected at the corners of its tiny yet malevolent maw. Cardinal plasma rained against the land, dripping from the wicked spiked extremities.

With his abominable Reaper in his left hand, Leif pounced down in the middle of the ongoing conflict. One arm reached out to the beastly ugliness, and his axe was towards the sadistic impaling animal. His meals were standing to the sides of him, and he couldn’t settle on which to devour first. But since the larger was already wounded, the Guardian allowed the other to scamper away with its existence.

The Overseer severed the beast with the Reaper into three portions; Leif’s breakfast, lunch, and dinner. He stayed in that bloodied mess after he cooked and consumed his feasts. He leaned against a strong tree, finding little time to relax.
The bones of his meal were scattered erratically across the soil. Leif would use them to sharpen his axe, and then toss them away into a large pile of other remnants in the center of Baranar's Woods.

It had been a good day.

A thick, gray mist blanketed the jungle during his plentiful rest. Leif awoke with the pungent aroma of eradication. He instinctively erected himself, the Guardian’s figure evenly coated in droplets of vapor. As he took hold of the Reaper, damp murky soot shrouded his palm from the staff.

The gathering of low clouds emanated this stench that infuriated the Keeper. His nostrils cowered from the nauseating haze. This was no morning dew.

To discover the meaning of the fog, Leif propelled his axe to the terrain, leaving his considerably immense fists bare. With every finger gouging the tree bark, Leif scaled the trunk until the mist embraced him no more. As his eyes traced down, the Shepherd of the forest observed the suffocating fog from below.

The blinding star leisurely began to rise. Blackness marched from beyond the green horizon. A complete horde of screaming shadowed malevolence. While the darkness approached, it visibly formed a mass of decay; an army.

One man, drenched in a cloaked smokiness, had led the squadron to Baranar, riding a corroded stallion. As the army dissolved into separate units, the town crumbled into a hissing pile of wretched ashes. Leif saw collapsing homes and weeping offspring through the fading haze of sin. In such a short time, a minuscule amount of malignant spirits and fiends shattered the lives of many.

Leif, while crouched in the untarnished treetop, watched a calmer man, outside the rubble. He was suited in a tattered and worn out gray draping coat. His hair was aged and discolored, as were the leather boots that strapped strongly around his feet. A mist flowed out from the tip of his pointing finger, which was pouring into the dismantled town.

A loud, bellow echoed amongst the rancid soldiers. It was the darkness mounted upon the horse. "Now, my phantoms! To the forest!!"

By those words, Leif bolted to the entrance of his beloved forest, but not before he took his axe from the soil. The army halted at his towering presence, but the man in gray continued passed the twitching mass. The frozen expression that painted across his face left an emotionless droplet of sweat fall down the Keeper’s backbone.

The man's arm extended outward, in the direction of Leif. His finger slanted in the air, pointing at the Guardian, while an infernal army gathered behind the man in gray. The power of the nameless being shot from the tip of his finger; hurling a ray of wicked mist at Leif’s shoulder. The Keeper of the Woods clenched his arm weakly, kneeling over in pain. As he leaned agonizingly, the gray villain launched an immoral attack into his chest. The ridiculous might left the forest completely vulnerable.

Leif lay limply, blood-spattered and groaning. His head splintered violently against the dirt. Upon impact, the soil rotted into mortification.

He could protect the forest no more.

The unidentified mist-bearer grinned at the forest, ignoring the fallen Guardian. Shards of blackened haze swirled wildly from the apex of his finger and began to putrefy the woodlands. Then, in a snap of his knuckles, the mist that had previously blanketed the forest peacefully had now twisted it into a barren waste land.

"Excellent, Synthetic." The man on the lifeless stallion stated. "Onward!" They charged through the hissing acid, on to the next obstacle in their way.

Leif gradually lost his existing color. His mangled and charred body was only being held up by his axe, which stood still. What was left was only a blind man's holiday. . .

But then he heard a voice . . .

bladedruid
03-12-2004, 11:14 AM
great job deminsion good story!

Kevbo
03-12-2004, 01:03 PM
WOW!! that was amazing.. Good job!
chapter 2 plz? :P

DiMeNsiOn
03-12-2004, 01:07 PM
Chapter 2 Comming soon. =]

mlandry
03-15-2004, 05:17 PM
Chapter 2 Comming soon. =]

somehow i doubt this.,.. ;)

Energizer
03-17-2004, 03:26 PM
Here is part two of DiMeNsioN's story. He cannot post it himself as he is banned and does not know if he will ever be unbanned.

Chapter Two: Nostalgia

“You’re not so tough.” A childish echoing voice whispered.

His decaying corpse lay as blackened ashes of leaves layered his torn remains. Thankfully, lean masses of tree roots emanated magnificently from his ribcage, restructuring his tattered chest. Though his focus was on restoring himself, Leif could not help but wonder who was speaking.

“Don’t recognize me? I’m surprised, Leif. You heard my cries for help.” Those words forced the Guardian to open his eyes. They scrambled aimlessly across the small visible distance, but Leif could only make out distortions of color. Although clearly in his mind, he knew that no one was there.

“You might as well quit looking for me, demon. No matter how strong you might be, you can’t behold the dead.” The voice exclaimed, “Some sort of magick is behind this . . . My spirit lies inside you, Guardian.” His violent tone soon muffled with tears.

Leif’s anger increased at the vicious pitch from the juvenile. He overlooked mending his lesions. In an attempt to stand, the Shepherd of the Woods dimly palmed the vanishing terrain with his colossal fists. Dismal premonitions clouded his thoughts as the ash frivolously descended down his remains.

The Guardian painfully tilted his spine to reach the mighty axe, which lay deep in the blackened roots of the ground “Weapon of wicked magick?” The voice said. “Sending roots through your enemy at your disposal . . . Repulsive.” Without Leif obtaining the opportunity to respond, the child continued. “Why am I bothering? I don’t need to talk to you. I know everythin’ about you now, Leif. Your brain is a sick diary, full of agony and sorrow. The sorcery woven into your blade is special too, isn’t it? Seems like the God of Earth controls it more than you do, Keeper. ”
Fear stopped the boy from continuing his speech. Though the Protector had no prey, the child believed he was still being hunted.

“Sigh, I ought to introduce myself, since it seems like I’m not going anywhere. The name’s Barret.” His voice persisted, faintly acerbic. “Looks like we’ll be great buds.”

Silence struck the delicate breezing winds. Barret stopped speaking whilst Leif gazed at his collapsed forest. He declined against his entrusted axe, focusing on the tarnished soot. The ashes barreled into the air stylishly, causing death to be nothing short of gorgeous.

He stood toward his forest in absolute shock, gazing at devastation of the purest kind. The panorama had twisted from abundant greens to a trampled blackness. Leif was the only evidence of Baranar’s Forest ever to be in existence. The incredible vision that passed both Leif and Barret left them speechless, thoughtless.

Wrathful indignations screamed from the depths of his soul. His arms flailed wildly into a brutal frenzy as he howled his pain away. Leif fell to his knees at some point in the inescapable vehemence. His weak grasp scratched a handful of tepid ash. The cinders sifted through his fingers like sand through a dune.

“You’re not the only person to lose something in their path. Family and friends of mine were burned until their last breath.” His voice halted briefly, permitting Barret to experience Leif’s tormented emotions. “You have to do something, Leif.”


As Mercu’s blinding star set into the mountains, a faint radiance appeared from afar and stood alone, glistening. “That must be Boldragoth, the “Safe City” . . . My parents dreamed of living there. Your forest stopped us from living out those visions.” Barret continued. “A large monastery was built in the center for Earth Elementals to worship our God, Dio. It’s surrounded by walls covered in symbols to protect the civilians from the evil.

“By your stance, I can only guess that Boldragoth is where you’re headed.” Barret said lightly.

Strong whispers of wind coiled hungrily from beneath Leif’s dashing feet. Ashen soot twisted into the air as the stars glided brilliantly by his form. The wind of Aidon guided him soothingly across the acidic field, through whispering grasses, and along arteries of rivers.

The moons soared into the sky as the Keeper approached the well-built dark kindling drawbridge. The door dripped through the wind royally like lava down an exploding mountain. An echo crashed into the dirt deafeningly. The city’s night lights emanated the opening magnificently. Leif calmly stepped up onto the drawbridge and began to walk into the kingdom.

Glowing Earthen defensive symbols were painted enigmatically upon the buildings and houses of Boldgragoth, as if their magick had recently been used. Several men and women had lay in the street, beaten with broken bones and missing limbs. The Shepherd of Baranar ignored the surroundings, and merely trailed the scent of the blackened mist, which richly emanated the Earthen fortress.

A young blonde haired vigilante stepped into Leif’s path with an undersized hand axe and a wooden shield the size of a dinner plate. The child trembled greatly as he took an amateur battle position.

“He’s no bigger than I am,” said Barret, his words grinning.
And then the boy swung. “For my father!” The child yelped, plunging towards the Keeper recklessly.

Leif’s hand collided with the hand axe tenaciously, the steel crunching within his grasp. In a slender flick of the Protector’s wrist, the axe flew cruelly into one of the stone huts, crashing intensely within the wall.

“He is not one of them, Seig.” An elderly dwarf softly whispered, revealing himself from one of the darkened alleys. “He is not part of this evil,” he said, knowing where Leif came from.

The dwarf scratched his beard gently as he gazed in awe of the Keeper of the Forest. A faint stench of sap and dried blood caressed his nose while the boy halted by the elder’s undersized hands. The Reaper’s blade grinded deeply into the stony path as Leif slothfully trailed by the wounded civilians, leaving nothing but his scent and impression behind.

A putrid stain of rusted blood swept along the walls, as if mighty hands traced against the stone smugly. The trail of plasma soon manifested simple words and phrases. “You will not be lost forever, Nol.”

“I’ve read about Nol before. My friend always used to teach me about the Great War. I only remember bits and pieces of the stuff she said, though.” Barret continued. “It happened some two hundred and fifty years ago. It was a war between good and evil. The two last draginas, Rein and Nol, were split and fought against each other in the form of dragons. The world dissipated from the long battles. And that leaves us to where we are today. . In shambles.” The child gave all the information that he could, though it was little to none.

The trail of blood sluggishly tapered into the castle, leaving the gateway torn, gashed, and beaten. Fragments of ashes and rotted muscle tissue blew wildly into Volkain’s winds as Leif strode into the castle. He lifted his axe and held it tightly, preparing for anything which was to come.

Kevbo
03-17-2004, 03:43 PM
omg.. wow..
more plz..

mlandry
03-17-2004, 04:46 PM
somehow i doubt this.,.. ;)

i take that back lol...:P

shiver-
03-18-2004, 07:22 PM
WOW thats good....and very long O_O

Ares
03-21-2004, 07:15 PM
if you havnt i adivse reading this now its worth the 30 minutes

KidArctica
03-22-2004, 04:31 PM
Chapter Three of Leif: Beautiful

The moons lifted above the horizon as the shadowed night soon followed. Flickering fireflies mimicked the glittered stars above them.

The road wherein the Keeper of the Woods traveled upon stretched regally from the gates of the city to the magnificent fortress, which emitted vividly from the center of Boldragoth. Vermillion hues spattered against the mineral pavement, along with faint traces of a diminished mist, leaving a maniacal odor of lunacy and abhorrence in its wake.

A deep, exasperating sigh cascaded from his chapped lips. “The man in gray . . .” Leif concisely conjured, inducing himself to believe that his foe was to blame for the decay upon the fallen city.

Barret felt the Shepherd of the Forest’s anger increase as he pivoted to gaze at his fallen dwelling. Corpses, blackened and macabre, smoldered sinisterly among sifts of ash, left from fiery leaves and ragged bones. Leif’s eyes dragged along to the city he once briefly explored, observing dim golden bulbs of candle lights glistening through the broken windows of the lifeless, torn Diomes.

“This is not the city that I used to dream of. . .” The soul of the boy thought as he tried to comprehend the reality in front of him.

The foul trail of blood flowed abysmally until it reached the entrance of the fortress. Leif’s calloused feet stepped over the gnarled and scorched ligaments of destroyed civilians which decorated the stony street. He followed the decadent path instinctively, allowing the stench of the haze to be his leader.

Although the Elementals of the Earth believed that the arcane symbols which blanketed the buildings of Boldragoth were enough for protection, a complicated fence secluded the monastery. Through an imperfection of the impervious barrier, Leif somehow managed to observe the brilliantly complex bed of flowers, where the entrance of the haven situated. Bright, vivid colors of blues, greens, and reds of the plant life fought the blinding night sky; both of which attempting to gain the eyes of the Keeper.

But something else caught his ever seeing eye.

The moons secreted a subtle outline along the forms of two flanks of blackened troops, who stood strongly before the monastery’s door, as if they were waiting for something or someone to exit from within it. And in that moment of recognizing that those were in fact of the same evil who eradicated his forest, Leif grinned.

“It’s payback time!” Barret accidentally slid out his two cents. He clearly didn’t realize the reality of the situation.

The Shepherd of the Trees lifted his axe, and split the wall against his blade like a knife to a loaf of bread, tearing the rock into violent shards of minerals, which sprayed sporadically throughout his surroundings. Ignoring the splintered sharpness of the boulders, Leif lifted the Reaper to his shoulder, stepped beyond the shattered divider, and marched strongly toward the guised army.

The pungent taste of eradication nipped Leif’s tongue and grew more fervent in each revenge-motivated stomp. With every step toward the soldiers, his anger increased. As he drew closer toward the mass of evil, Leif began to develop an aggressive smirk upon his chapped, worn lips. He was sure of the pain that he and his axe would force upon the malevolent warriors, just as they did forced upon him and his beloved forest.

The Guardian watched the statues of death stand upon the emerald grass, which slowly began to decay at their rotting feet. He could hardly decipher the appearances of the soldiers from the blackness which masked them. And they ignored the massive tree-like giant, as if the forces needed some sort of manipulation or impulse to drive them further into the conflict.
He stood there silently, waiting for the army, who were driven by malice, to inflict the first move. But his patience was disrupted by his infuriating odium.

“I am here to avenge the death of my trees, of my plants, and of my home.” Leif whispered deeply, attempting to finally grasp their attention. “Come forth with your fists and demon’s magick.”

The zombified ghoul who stood closest to Leif twitched malignly at his voice. His neck awkwardly warped in the Keeper’s direction as the glare from the moons lit upon his scorched, dissolving face. A dying hiss drooled from the soldier’s decomposing maw while his tattered bones bizarrely repositioned themselves in a crouching posture. His fingers curled into destructive fists as his heels lifted from the obsidian dirt.

“Isn’t he an easy sight on the eyes?” Barret spoke to Leif sarcastically.

The phantom leaped into the air nauseatingly, growling like a rabid wolverine at its last meal. It soared as if Volkain, the Lord of the Air, guided him through the calm zephyrs. As the embodiment of evil fell toward the awaiting Leif, the tainted fragments of cloth which covered the beast began to dissipate in an acidic blackness, melting from his form.

The Shepherd serenely stood, waiting for the appropriate time to strike upon the ghastly demon.

And so the creatures crashed. The being’s teeth reached in anguish just as Leif’s shoulder shrugged to the side, drifting away from the hurling attack. He halted the soldier in its tracks, strategically placing his great hand upon the zombie’s chest. His fingers completely enfolded around its frail torso as Leif’s grip tightened, manifesting a squealing howl from the trapped essence of malevolence.

The other statues of war understood its yelp as a cry for help, and they responded. All of soldiers (except for one, who, for some reason or another, continued to stay as still as death in the pathway toward the monastery’s door) twitched in the direction of the Guardian. They leaped instinctively into the air, repeating very similar attacks of the first soldier.

As a form of the Guardian’s reflexes, Leif crashed the trapped warrior between his grip and the dirt while his hips pivoted in the air. His massive calloused feet shredded into the soft ebbs, only to meet the second of the ravaging soldiers. Thin tunnels of tree roots emanated divinely from within Leif’s toes, inching around the soulless creature’s throat. He brought his foot down, crushing any technique of breathing along with it.

Just as the soldier edged its last breath, Leif stood once more, releasing the first of the zombies from his grip. However, it lay there awkwardly, as if its ribcage had completely imploded into its heart; its limbs intertwining aggressively with one another.

The last three of the charging beasts landed abruptly before the towering giant as they observed his abrasive and unmerciful strength. All three hissed and clawed at the air, attempting to frighten the Keeper of the Forest. But the Guardian cackled, and stood fiercely, while crashing the hilt of the Reaper into the tarnished battlefield.

“Too much spinning. . .” Barret blearily said, as if he somehow became dizzy from the fighting.

The Guardian took no time to recuperate; he charged belligerently toward the forces while lifting his axe and holding it beside his darting torso. Debris from the rotting stones splintered away at his charging feet. Leif’s speed was a mass of confusion, blinded by the whizzing ebbs amongst his form.

The three of the blackened evils stood blankly, as if they had nothing to react against. And before the first of the soldiers realized that the Shepherd had been in front of it, the Reaper collided into its collarbone (or whatever seemed to be the collarbone), as dull sliver of blackened cloth flew from its mangled body. The Earth magick tore away from the blade of the axe, melting into the adversary’s blood stream. Suddenly, the creature began to petrify as his muscle and bone tissue altered into fragments of wood. Roots forcefully shredded from its toes and crashed into the dirt as his arms stiffly lifted into the air. Stems of leaves slithered out from its pores as it stood, dying.

In a rapid spin of his wrists, Leif decisively lashed out at another wicked demon with the spiraling handle of the great axe. It rammed against the side of its warped head, manifesting an earth shattering boom from the collision. Fragments of the festering skull spread wildly against the ground as the body limply fell; soft onyx ooze dripping from its wound. The Keeper of the Forest dropped the Reaper upon the decaying body, leaving him weaponless.

His head tilted toward the last of the warriors who were willing to die and snorted slightly. A weak essence of the gray mist which obliterated his forest emptied from his nostrils. Leif began to mimic the demon vaguely as he crowed to the mineral pavement, scraped his knuckles against the ground, and brutally launched himself into the air, only to catch the soldier while airborne. The Keeper’s fierce grip clawed into the cloth that covered the fiend as his feet planted determinedly into its distorted knees. However, the momentum of Leif’s gigantic body continued through the soldier, leaving his enemy completely powerless in his grasp. He hurled himself and his adversary into the stone walkway, digging into the rocks mightily. The creature died upon impact.

Slowly, Leif tipped his head upward, realizing where he had landed. His dirty branched dreads filtered away from his chocolate face as his eyes peered before him. Two large boots emptied from beneath a long faded gray coat. Soft trails of mist stormed along his ligaments and torso. Leif jumped back breathlessly, realizing who the last of the statues had been.

“You . . .” Leif murmured under his breath as he reached for his great axe. A sudden fear struck into his heart.

Synthetic stood emotionlessly, staring into the moonlight. He hardly had any interest in anything around him, especially not the Guardian who stood before him. The weapon of mist coldly remained standing in front of the monastery’s door. And before Leif could bring Synthetic the pain in which he deserved, the doors opened.

A galloping decomposing stallion poured from the entrance. The two full moons unmasked the rider, only to reveal a black robe, which completely blanketed the unknown man.

He turned to speak toward the gray statue. “Our search continues, Synthetic. Come.” A deep, maniacal voice emptied from the opening of his cloak.

The man in gray nodded, stepping over one of he decaying bodies which scattered upon the ground, and followed his shrouded lord. But he continued to ignore the towering Leif.

“Don’t worry, my dear tree lurker, you will have your attempt upon revenge.” The man on the corroded horse cackled. “But now is not the time.”

Leif stood in complete terror, and for the first time, he could not instinctively react to his opponent. The power which emanated from both Synthetic and the shrouded man struck through Leif’s gaping eyes like salt to a wound. His mind was completely empty of thought, as if his ideas for revenge and death cowered away into the corner of his head. The Keeper had finally felt fear.

The two strange forces of nature emptied from within the moonlight, and faded into nothingness.

“Who. . .? What in th- . . . ?” Barret was speechless, but felt as if it was necessary to say something.

Before Leif had the ability to react toward the two forms of malice, a shattering yell echoed from within the monastery. “Help!!!” Screamed a child’s voice.

“Quick! You can get them later! You have to go in there!” Barret exclaimed.

Still struck by the icy dagger of fear, Leif blankly slid his neck toward the monastery’s opening, nodding.

DiMeNsiOn
03-30-2004, 12:59 PM
Ok.. so i can actually read feedback now. So if you have any comments or suggestions. Let me know!

Dominium
03-30-2004, 07:19 PM
PRAISE THE LORD DIMENSION IS BACK!!


omg i missed you so bad :(


hug?

Ornbarn
03-30-2004, 08:00 PM
Dime is back!!!! YAY!!!!! and by the way, i loved the story, can't wait for Chapter Four...

chiral
03-30-2004, 10:14 PM
very nice :)
love how u section the parts for easy reading.
be cool if we can do a collaboration.

read through some parts of your story again.
love the style.
got this old-school epic feel to it.
the languague is will chosen--especially the adjectives.

Ares
05-23-2004, 07:41 PM
Did anyone else enjoy this story? Im thinking about carrying it on. Or starting a new project, And completing this one at a later date.

UDJAT
06-04-2004, 01:33 PM
Lol

SePh)i(RoTh
06-10-2004, 05:59 PM
Good story dime, plz continue...