I gave it a go

[Hmf-Waste]

Well after listening to many great audios in the members forum i was inspired to try my own kinda sucks but what the hell ill post it any way.
It is a Human vs Nightelf, human prospectus
after about 3 mins you have to turn the sound up because for some reason my voice goes really quiet :S :starwars:

My audio (http://rapidshare.de/files/1963407/1st_audio.rar.html)

intro: Rhazel-If your mother only new
outro: Babyshambles-killamangiro
Sorry its a rar file.

[DrZaP84]

Hey man, not bad for a first time. Uh, yea lol gotta find fillers for those times when there is nothing. Also, I would say you should give a bit more info. I liked when you said that with the wood peas. you could see where that he crept at the shop. That was good. Also, man dont take this the wrong way, but you sound depressed, hah, yea, not meant to be mean. And I dont want to seem like the advocate for being a perky sob, but I swear a little enthusiasm wouldnt hurt right? but yea, very nice try for your first commentary. I mean, you can only get better. So, Ill be looking forward to your next audio.

[Hmf-Waste]

hehe Depressed!! i add some enthusiasm for sure next time and prepare better for the filler bits. Thxs for the feed back

[Dakonblackblade]

Depressed ?
Listen to koddan

[DrZaP84]

heh yea, but dan is hillarious, and even he has a hint of enthusiasm for being an entertainer.

[Spookify]

lol yea i agree with zap, you did sound depressed, like i imaged some emo british kid sitting in his room lol :happy: anyway pretty good for first audio hope to see more

[Dakonblackblade]

Ohhh yeaaaaaaah riiiiiiiighttttttt(danish talk).Ok.Waste ill dl it and comment it later at night(at about 3 in the morning)greek time