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\/\/ick3d
03-22-2004, 10:00 PM
Theres a man in a study,

with a book in his lap,

and he's telling the world,

that theres no turning back

The man, he's an old one

and the years clearly show

but he cant be moved

by any that we know

He had a life, and a memory

now he's not really sure how it goes

but its sad, and its sweet, and he knew it complete,

when he wore a younger man's clothes

there was a time, when he was happy

but now the smiles just run off his face

And hes so sure he could have been something,

If only he had gotten out of this place

The book lies forgotten,

a memory without a base

the years flash by

and are seen on the curves of his face

It was a pretty good life for an old one,

and now he just gives me a smile

becuase he knows that i know

he wont be around for a while

So he puts down the book, jsut leaves it behind

along with the burden of cares

and leaves the study, slowly and surely

the last of his memory-ridden lairs.




\/\/icks

Tank.
03-23-2004, 07:02 AM
Originally Posted by VVick3d

but now the smiles just run off his face..

..

and now he just gives me a smile..


Contradictory!! ~

good poem otherwise. -,.- |._.|

shiver-
03-23-2004, 07:53 PM
good poem :D nice rhymes

\/\/ick3d
03-24-2004, 01:26 AM
Contradictory!! ~

good poem otherwise. -,.- |._.|
lollolololo

GO4GOAL
03-24-2004, 02:34 AM
wao u have too much time

\/\/ick3d
03-24-2004, 08:10 PM
no sam, just do this 4 funz

Gondorff
03-28-2004, 12:18 AM
very good. you have definitely developed as a poem writer.

even though it doesn't all rhyme up, it still flows very nicely.

gj :cool2: