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Allied
05-06-2004, 02:33 AM
Kalimdor.
A Warcraft 3 story by Dave Smith, aka "Allied".

Disclaimer: I do not own the creative rights to Warcraft 3: Reign of Choas or Warcraft 3: The Frozen Throne. I am writing this story not for sale or profit. Warcraft 3 and all related products are property of Blizzard Entertainment.


Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

The glory of nature was all around. The trees flowed in the cool spring breeze, as always, for the proximity to the world tree kept the forests of ashenvale in a state of constant rebirth. There was no winter here, only the soothing warmth of the spring sun and the moon, the ever-graceful symbol of Elune, the moon-goddess. The tranquility of the forest let no invader guess the might that slept within, for although the forests of Kalimdor seemed unihabited, the eyes of the Sentinals were everywhere...

The scene changes to the Trisfald Glades, north of the capital city of Lordaeron...
"How long do we have to wait here?" asked Daniel.
"As long as the Captain wishes us to, and you know that!" answered his comrade, for the tenth time. He was starting to get annoyed, for the last three hours Daniel had done nothing but complain about how he had waiting around for nothing.
"And where are we going we he gets here?" asked Daniel for the fourth time.
"I already told you, damn it! We're going to the outpost north of here, we have to keep an eye on the merchants coming in, obviously the disease from the north is in the food they bring." snapped his comrade, for the fourth time. He was getting oh so tired of this conversation, and hoped his Captian would arrive soon to shut Daniel up already.
"I'm hungry!"
"So am I."
"Well, I think this is pointless!"
"So do I."
"My feet hurt!"
"OH SHUT THE HELL UP ALREADY!" He screamed. He couldn't take it anymore, one more word out of this kid and he'll go insane. Luckily, it didn't come to that...
"Men! Sorry I'm late, but the commander of this area needed to talk with me, so I had to take a little detour" called the Captain, who was jogging up the road towards them.
"No problem captain, we send the others to the outpost already, and waited for you as you ordered." answered the tall, burly man who had led daniel here.
"Very good!" exclaimed the captain pleased, he had expected the troops to be still gathering when he arrived, seeing them already on the way was good to hear. He looked to the shorter, younger man next to his sargent. "You must be Daniel, I knew your father well."
As did every commander from here to Dalaran, thought Daniel. "Yes, he spoke a few times of you, captain Herold."
"Really? A general speaking of a simple man such as myself?" asked Herold sceptically. "Well, no matter, we must be on our way. Keep an eye out, there are bandits nearby, I have heard, but I doubt they will show themselves to seasoned troops such as ourselves."
"They would regret it." grinned the Sargent.

And so they were off, marching over the roads of Trisfald. It was a rather uneventful journey at first, for they were all alone on this road, since most merchants weren't allowed this far south out of fear of the spreading plague in the north. The journey would take almost three days, and was comprised of nothing but walking. In the breaks to eat and rest, daniel learned much of his comrade, the Sargent named Garrel. He told daniel of his youth in the southlands of lordaeron, and how his village had been close to an orc internment camp. Daniel was surprised to hear he had actually seen orcs before, he himself only knew they were big, green, violent creatures. His own youth had been spend in the splendid mansion of his father, a great, since retired general of the army. He knew little of the world around him, but was determined not to live in the shadow of his father, and show his own worth.

On the third and last day of the journey to the outpost the three men came to an interesting find on the road. An old merchant caravan lay burned on the field nearby, obviously it had been attacked by bandits. Immediatly all three left the road, knowing full well that, although they were seasoned, armed soldiers, bandits wouldnt mind killing them too if they outnumbered them enough. From the safety of a bush thicket near the road, the three stopped to discuss their plans.

"We should continue on, and send a message from the outpost back to the commander, informing him that he should send a patrol here to take care of the problem" mused the captain, thinking more outloud than anything.
"That would probably be for the best" agreed Garrel.
"What? We should find the bastards that did this and deal with them accordingly!" exclaimed Daniel. How could they be thinking of moving on when this threat was here? They couldn't just leave the murderers of this innocent merchant unpunished!
"No. They are probably many more than us, and we have been marching for the past two days. We will move on. There is no reason for any of us to die when others can deal with the problem much easier." answered the Captain, slightly annoyed that one of his men would diagree with him so easily. "The outpost is nearby, we will be there soon."
The men moved on, though Daniel was not at all content with the decision.

From a thicket on the other side of the road, a gangly humanoid creature watched with red eyes as the three men moved off. It then turned to the bloodied body of what looked to be a rogue of some kind. It was hard to tell who the person was exactly as it's body had been ripped open and large amounts of flesh and been gnawed off the corpse's bones. The creature, seeing most flesh already consumed, turned to the other four of it's kind, growling somethng that almost sounded like speech, they ran off on all fours into the forest nearby...

The men reached the outpost an hour later, abd were greeted warmly by the commander.
"Ah! Captain! Your men have already arrived, and we will be ready to begin our mission tommorow. We will find out what is spreading this plague yet." pledged the commander.
The diease had been spreading throughout northlands of Lordaeron ever since Prince Arthas had left on his mysterious quest. Eventually, his father the King was forced to quarantine the entire northland, stopping trade with the south. This itself didn't have grave effects on the local economy, but the cause of the plague had to be found before too many people suffer.

That night was comprised of the men preparing their gear for the coming mission. They were to search the towns, as it seemed the mages of the Kiirin Tor believed that a enemy, a cult of some kind, was magically spreading the diease.
"Why? Why sicken the towns if they want to attack us? What good is killing the people they wish to rule?" Daniel heard one solider ask another.
"Who knows? Maybe its just some sick-minded fool who has gone mad, and doesnt care about lordship," answered the other.
"A mage gone mad? Maybe it's that Kel'thuzd fellow, he was banished from the Kirin Tor a long time ago, and nobody has seen him since. He wanted to research necromancy, I heard."
"Yes, I heard that too. Maybe he has been gone insane, and is seeking revenge now."
"Well, we will find him and end this madness. No crazed mage is gonna keep me from home too long, I will tell you that!" the two solider nodded to each other, certain that this misson wouldn't take more than a week at most. Find the mage, kill him, and end this plague. That's all there was to do...

The men ate their dinner of salted meats and dried vegatables, and then lay down to rest in the small forts barracks. Only the night's watchmen stayed awake, taking posistions along the 3 meter tall stone walls of the fort. The sun was setting, and the night's watch routine came to pass as it did each night!
"The sun is setting! Close and seal the gate!" called the commander from his private office and home.
The two guards came down from the two smalls towers on both sides of the gate they had held lookout from, and closed the wooden gate, sealing it with a large wooden beam. They then turned around to go back up the towers....... and then turned around again to the gate.
"Strange," said the first guard, moving next to the gate, and inspecting the wood the gate was made of.
"You felt it too? Maybe the wood is getting old and rotting in places," thought the second guard outloud.
"Must be. Doesn't seem to be any open spots though," said the first. The two looked at each other again, and then shrugged, and returned to their spots on the towers. It was only a cold breeze flowing by them, nothing to worry about....
From the middle of the courtyard, where all guards were in view, a silent whisper, like that of one beyond the grave was heard, but no guard noticed.

Daniel slept uneasy that night. There was much to do tomorrow, and he had never seen combat, although there was no real reason to believe it would come to bloodshed, something inside told him...

Daniel sprang to a sitting posistion on his bed as an alarm was heard. There was yelling, and the sound of a bowstring releasing a arrow. A cry, high-pitched and almost inhuman is heard. A crash of something organic hitting wood, and more crys. The men around him were running around, quickly putting on their breastplates, grabbing their swords and shields from the stands near the doors and running outside. Daniel scrambled to do the same, already he was the only one left in the barracks. He donned his breastplate, and ran to the door grabbing his sword, leaving his shield.

Choas reigned in the courtyard. Strange, horrid beings were running through the gate, they had no weapons, but seemed to fight the soliders with their claws and teeth. Already two soliders lay dead near the door to the barracks, their legs and faces were slashed and bloody.
"Form up! Take formation! Archers, open fire!" yelled the commander. His face showed the same surprise and horror of his underlings, but he tried to stay calm. The soliders slowly stopped desperatly running and fighting alone, and formed near a corner of the fort, while the guards on the walls had finally sheathed their swords and took the bows from their backs.
A moment later, several bowstrings were heard being let go, and a volley of arrows whizzed by overhead. Some flew into the middle of the courtyard, were a large concentration of the strange creatures were gathering, preparing to assualt the soliders now in a defensive posistion. The rest of the arrows landed in front of the gate, where more of the creatures were entering the fort. Only half found a mark, calling forth more of the high-pitched crys Daniel had heard before.
What I would give for elven archers on those walls now, thought the commander. Elves never missed their mark.
The creatures, now gathered, charged towards the formed soliders.
"Fight! The light will have at these unholy creatures!" yelled the commander, hoping to lessen the fear shown clearly in the faces of his men. As he yelled the creatures slammed into the front line of soliders.
The solider were scared, yes, but far from defenseless. The years of training of the men took over, and as the creatures came within reach of their swords, they struck out from behind their shields. Since the swords were conceled almost until the moment of impact, the monsters couldn't predict the stroke and evade it. The first line of attackers fell quickly to the flurry of well-guided swords. Legs and arms, and even heads of the creatures flew backwards into the coming creatures, who clumsily tripped over the bodies of their just fallen breathen. The next wave was not so easily killed, and they reared up and used their claws to slash and cut, to little effect. The breastplates and shields of the soliders rendered the effect of simple claws to nothing. The second wave went down quite fast also, and when all of the attackers lay dead, the commander noticed the next wave to still be off on the other side of the courtyard, closing fast.
"VOLLEY!" yelled the commander as loud as he could. The soliders all immediatly went to one knee, holding thier shields infront of them, forming a wall. A line of archers stood behind them with bows drawn and arrows fitted. They released the arrows over the heads of the soliders, hitting the creatures, sending many of them to the ground. The men stood up again, preparing for yet another onslaught.

The third wave advanced no further. The creatures stopped the attack, and the soliders dared not charge, so great was their fear still that they refused to leave the safety of the formation. Then, as if they all heard a command or voice in unison, they ran through the shattered gate, and into the forest. The solider remained in the formation for another moment, as if waiting for some greater evil to strike out at them, but nothing happened. They then left the formation, and the commander ordered several men to improvise re-sealing the gate.
"What in the holy light was that?" cried one man. "Was that the plague we are to destroy?"
"It would seem so," answered the commander.
"We can't kill them all alone! We need reinforcements," he cried, almost pleading with the commander.
"Yes, we do. We will remain here and send for more men, then we will find out what those.... 'things' were!" he agreed, he didnt know what those monsters were, what they were doing here or where they had come from. He would not risk their lives, not until he knew what they were fighting against.

The men then spent the night gathering the bodies of the fallen creatures. Closer inspection showed the creatures to be almost human-like, but somehow... changed. Their skin seemed to be slightly decomposed, and their teeth had grown to insane proportions. Looking upon the dead body, it seemed as if they had already been dead for quite some time.
The bodies were piled rather quickly outside the fort, since the soliders were nervous about leaving the improvised repaired gate open, oil was poured over them, and they were set on fire. The guard on the wall was doubled, and the other soliders spent the rest of the night beside a large fireplace in the corner of the courtyard, speaking quietly of the horror they had just been witness to.

Daniel spoke little, but silently ate the food that had been passed around, and tried in vain to find comfort in the warmth of the fire. Those creatures were like nothing he had seen.
"I don't see what was so bad about them. Sure they look horrid, but what can claws and teeth do to steel armor?" exclaimed one solider at last, as if he had been thinking about it for the last two hours since the attack.
"I wouldn't go that far" answered another, as a murmur of agreement went through the men. "Those things got two of us."
"They weren't wearing armor and were in panic. Once we were together, they didn't stand a chance! Hell, I have seen orcs, and these... things aren't nearly as tough as them" answered another. The crowd seemed to be growing more confident that this threat looked alot more worse then it actually was. A few more troops and they will march onto this enemy, and destroy it.

The next day was spent completly repairs on the gate, and sending a messenger back south, to call for more men. Daniel, Gerrel and Herold all found themselves with nothing to do, so we sitting around and doing exactly that, nothing. It didn't last for very long though, as the commander called a small group to perform a patrol in the nearby area, to find out if those creature were still nearby. Daniel and Garrel were amoung that patrol. They were thankful for something to do, but still, this was not what they had expected.

The patrol left the fort a short time later, taking to the forests almost at once, not daring to stay exposed on the street. They traveled north, as that was the direction the attackers had fled to. They found trails right away, and decided the best course of action was to follow them, and see if the enemy had set up a camp nearby. They traveled for several miles, following the trail of the enemy...

*** ***

At the fort, the commander read the message from Dalaran that had just arrived per messenger.
Commander of the Northland defenses,
Jaina Proudmoore has discovered the plague in the northlands to be, in fact, an undead army.
"Undead? What the...." the commander said outloud as he read on.
Stay within the safety of your fortifications. Paladins of the silver hand are on their way, as well as elven preists. Do not, under any circumstances, engage the enemy before they arrive, for the enemy has eyes and ears everywhere. Meeting them alone on the field of battle would be foolish, and entirely in vain. I must implore you to practice patience, and await our arrival.
"By the light, the patrol...."

*** ***

The patrol examined the trails renewed, and found them to be newer than a few miles back. They were gaining on the enemy. They did not know, that the enemy already knew where they were, however.
The reached a clearing a few hours later, and found what seemed to be the camp of the enemy. They stayed hidden within the trees, and wondered at what they saw.
The ground around the camp was dead. All plant life such as grass was gone, and the trees had no leaves anymore. The buildings in the camp where ornate and decorated, and it seemed impossible to build such things in less than a few months. They heard a rumbling sound, like that of a dwarven machine drawing close, and what they saw was beyond thier imaganation.
A machine of some kind was entering the camp. It looked to be some kind of catapult, but they couldn't imagine that the small lever that would normally fire the stones was strong enough to do so. It moved to a fenced off area of the camp, which had some kind of green mist rising from the ground within, and three men in robes with staves moved toward it. They gave out some orders, and the same creatures that had attacked them came near. They opened a part of the machine, and the creatures started carrying objects from the machine to the fenced-in area.
"Corpses, my god..." said Garrel
"What?" asked Daniel, not believing what he heard.
"They are carrying dead bodies" said Garrel.
"My god, we need to get back to base and report this" said Daniel. Was it just him, or had it just gotten alot cooler?

"There is no need to go anywhere, you can join your comrades," said a voice behind them. At first, Daniel wished not to look behind him, for he had heard voices of old wizards and generals before, but this voice sounded like nothing like what he had just heard. The voice was evil, and he expected to see a nightmare when he turned. However, he still did, and wished that he had not, if only to end it quickly.
Behind him was something that was not at all natural, and not even alive. The men turned to see a being that floated from the ground, for from their crouching posistions they could see it nothing underneath it. It was wearing robe, which seemed unbelievably old and worn, and the most noticable characteristic, was the fact it had no skin or muscles. It was a skeleton, and looked to be some great evil which had been chained for ages under the earth, only to have escaped.
The men stood frozen in fear, not knowing what to do. Garrel seemed also so, and though he looked at be frantically looking for an escape route, he was in fact searching for other enemies nearby, for the strange being seemed to be alone. Garrel looked over the being again, trying desperatly to calm the fear that threatened to overcome him. Looking at it he came to a impossible conclusion.... this..."thing"....was an orc. The horns coming from where his mouth would be be, the bodily structure was of that of an orc, not a human being. So, this new threat was from the orcs, he should have known.
"Out of the way, demon, or I will destroy you," threatened Garell, the monster looked at him with what almost seemed surprise, and the men beside him snapped back out of thier fear, drawing their swords, preparing to attack the thing.

The Lich chuckled inwardly, it had been long since a being had threatened him. These humans were amusing, and would make good servants for ner'zhul. First, of course, he would have to end their lives. We couldn't have them leave alive, of course. He pondered if he should call his servants to him to end these living creatures, but decided that they were no threat to him, and he had lost enough already in that foolish attack on the fort. Arg, what had he been thinking? He should have directed the attack much better, he had heard ner'zhul displeased with the foolish and unnecessary waste of freshly gained soliders. They were at a critical point in the mission, and such losses were unacceptable, even if also unimportant.
The Lich wondered who to kill first. The solider who had dared challenge him? No, he should die last, so he may understand his foolishness of not fleeing in terror the first moment he had seen one of the ghouls. He would have pondered longer, but some madness actually possessed one of the lifelings to attack him.

Daniel charged. He knew not why he did it, or how he gathered the strength to, but he did. He brought his sword up, dropping his shield and grasping it with both his hands, he brought it high over his head, and charged the skeleton-thing. He was within a few feet when something strange happened. The air around him radiated with cold, seemingly coming straight from the being he was attacking, and the air grew thick. He ignored it and striked, which sealed his doom, for the sword glanced away before even reaching his target, and Daniel fell to the ground, in agony.
His sword was covered with ice, and the guantlets of his armor which covered his hands were also. The stroke never even met its target, and Daniel couldn't stand up, for the cold spread into his entire body, crippling him, and leaving him on the ground, shivering like one who had just been pulled from the waters of a frozen-over lake.
The other five men charged after seeing him drop, in a desperate attempt to live. They too, did not even reach the being, for it brought its boney hands infront of himself, and then quickly raised the to the sky. An explosion followed, centered right in the middle of the group, an explosion of icy, freezing cold, not of fire. The men all fell to the ground, Garrell and Daniel shivered uncontrollably, while the other four died almost immediatly.

The Lich looked apon the two men still alive, impressed at their strength, knowing full well they would not live. He smiled inwardly, moved closer to them, and said quietly:
"Embrace the cold...."

Vaulander
05-06-2004, 02:52 AM
Excellent. Some small typo's which we have discussed, but nothing to take away from the joy of reading it. Keep going mate!
V.

IDoPost
05-06-2004, 10:06 AM
Its a good thing the guys who post "Too long, didn't read," when a post is over 2 sentences, don't take up residence here. =)

From what I got to reading, looks really good.

ItsAbOutTimE
05-07-2004, 05:32 PM
From where I stopped to.. which was about the middle.. was good

Allied
06-09-2004, 12:31 PM
Kalimdor.
A Warcraft 3 story by Dave Smith, aka "Allied".

Disclaimer: I do not own the creative rights to Warcraft 3: Reign of Choas or Warcraft 3: The Frozen Throne. I am writing this story not for sale or profit. Warcraft 3 and all related products are property of Blizzard Entertainment.

Feel free to comment, fools!


Chapter 2: Lordaeron at War.

A chimerae sat perched on a massive tree above its great nest, watching the valley below it. The fearsome two-headed dragon watched for small animals it could catch to feed its young. Down below, a hippogryph, a being that had the body of a raven, and the head and feet of a stag sat pearched on a tree, watching the chimerae. The dragon considered attempting to catch the hippogryph, but dismissed the idea, as hippogryphs were fearsome fighters themselves.
The hippogryph and the chimerae alike kept a watchful eye over the forest. The dragon had heard Elune's call, and knew something was coming, as did the raven-stag in the valley. The goddess of Kalimdor was calling all forces of the forest to awake, but did not yet reveal what great threat was coming...


The scene changes to an old church in New Stormwind, the capital of Lordaeron. A group of men were gathered in the church, wearing armor, and what almost looked like preist cloaks. They were discussing a message they had received from the Kirin Tor in Dalaran.
"Undead? Are you sure? How do they know this?" asked one of the men.
"I am not sure, but they have been investigated it, and this is what they found." answered the one holding the message.
"Well then we will march apon this evil, and the light will give us strength to defeat them" said another.
"Where is Kalin?" asked the fourth.
"He is still in the chapel, he hasnt finished his prayers yet."

The Paladins of the silver hand were the great warrior preists of the Alliance. In the last war, they fought on steeds against the orcish horde, but after the war they took to a life of prayer and healing. They were still trained in fighting skills, and were widly respected by soliders and townsfolk alike. A myth in Lordaeron was that the very presence of a paladin would protect an army, and the light granted them power to heal great wounds instantly. They lost none of their ability to use the light to destroy demons and other unnatural forces, and were still a force to be reckoned with. Now, the silver hand wasn't nearly as numerous as it once was, and was not used in battle, but as small task forces.

"What is our mission?" asked Kalin Dawnbreaker, who joined the group a while later.
"We are to go to a fort at the borders of the northlands, and help the troops their destroy this undead plague before it spreads further south." answered Jordan Lightseeker, a trusted friend of Kalin.
"I am pleased that Lord Uther chose us for this mission, but sad that he will not accompany us. I wonder why he made such haste to Quel'thalas," mused Kalin.
"I wonder also, but that is not our concern, we must depart as soon as possible," his friend answered.
"Of course. We will begin making preperations right away, and leave in the morning."

***** ***** ***** *****

What had happened? Why was he here? Did he not die? Was this the place of light after the darkness? Where were his fathers to greet him?
Daniel stirred. He was lying on the cold ground. He did not remember what he was doing here, but did remember the cold. It had consumed him, and he had lost all thought after that. He couldn't remember where he was, or even who he was, and all that he heard were thoughts that were not his, and commands. He felt, spent, and without energy. The warmth of flowing blood and his beating heart were gone, taken by the cold. He had died, he knew that, he had felt the last breathe and accepted the ending.
Now strange voices called him back, commanding him to return, calling him back. Ner'zhul. The lich-king was commanding him. His spirit resisted.
Not like this. Not this. Not like this.
The voice invited, telling him of power and glory that would come to him. the present of eternal life...
Not like this....Not this way. Let me go.
The grasp on his soul hardened. The voice showed him his fighting was in vain. He would come back, and he will serve the scourage.
No. Never. Not like this...
The voice grew angry. No person can resist. Nothing can stop it. He would not be set free. He would serve the scourage, no matter what. There was no escape. Yet his spirit resisted.
No. Please. Not like this...
The voice was enraged, and it's wrath was felt by his victum. It grasped his soul in an iron, ice cold grip and commanded he return. His spirit weakened, and he was brought back, to serve Ner'zhul, for all time...

***** ***** ***** *****

The paladins, accompanied by a group of elven preists, were on their way to the outpost where they would launch their attack against this undead plague. They had been on the road for several days, and would reach their goal tomorrow. It was growing late, and they had begun setting up camp for the night.
"I will take over the early watch, who will do the late?" asked Kalin. His friend Jordan offered to take it over, which surprised none of the others, both were known to be fiercly aware of their duty, and never failed to volenteer for any job that needed to be done.
They expected nothing of interest to happen, so they had a small meal, and the men lay down to rest for the night.

Later Kalin sat by the fire, nursing it to ensure it not go out. He looked off into the night. The moon shone brightly, sheding its light to make him able to see the street a few yards off. He could see well this night, so bright was the moon, and there were many stars, without a cloud anywhere.
Kalin mused to himself what these "undead" things would look like. He had heard that they had no weapons, and attacked a man like beasts. He saw hardly any threat in that.

He stood, and for a moment, a shadow seemed to pass over him. Kalin looked to the sky, thinking a bird had flown by, strange at this time of night. Seeing nothing, he turned back to the fire, and seeing it to be burning well, he walked among the tents, looking off to the street and among the trees.
He heard the sound of a tent opening, and saw Jordan coming out. Seeing him, he walked over to him.
"Alright. I have slept long enough, your turn now. Seen anything strange?" asked Jordan.
"No, not at all. The most interesting sight has been a bird flying by," answered Kalin.
"A bird?"
"Yes, one flew over me a few moments ago."
"There are no birds here. The winter is growing near, they should have all left for the south by now," said Jordan, puzzled.
The men would have continued puzzling over the forgotten bird if they had not been startled by a scream in the sky. A large dark object was flying straight at them.
The flying object dived at them, and its legs were visiable in the moonlight, streching out to Jordan. He lifted him hammer, and waiting til the being was close enough, swung at it. It easily evaded, trying to catch him with it's clawed feet, but Jordan was agile enough to evade it.
It forgot Kalin, and that cost it dearly, for Kalin knew how to defeat this monster. He raised his hammer above his head, and crying out in a language known only to servants of the light, the camp became as bright as day for a moment. A flash of light struke the flying thing, and exploded into flame on contact. The monster screamed a cry of pain, and fell to the ground, unmoving. Kalin moved closer with Jordan next to him, both holding their great hammers ready, and found the creature dead. Kalin look at Jordan;
"It seems we have met our enemy."

Closer inspection of the creature in the light of morning, after it had been kept near the fire and under close watch all night, saw the creature was indeed like no living being they had ever encountered. It's face was like something out of a nightmare, long sharp teeth, a flat nose and also, strangly enough, a beard. It's wings were those of a bat, and its clawed feet seemed as sharp as swords. The creature was burned, and the group moved on, today they would reach the outpost.

Apon reaching the outpost, they noticed the repaired gate right away, and the still smoking pile of bodies a short distance from the fort. They were greeted by the commander once they arrived.
"You have been attacked?" asked Jordan.
"Yes, they attacked us the day before yesterday."
"How many men did you lose?" Jordan looked around, and noticed there were still many men on the walls, and more going about carrying out the daily chores.
"Three in the inital attack, I send out a scout party too, but they haven't returned," the commander said almost as an apology.
"I doubt they will. We have some things to prepare for our advance, we will leave tomorrow, agreed?"
"Agreed."
Jordan went back to the paladins, told them to prepare thier armor and weapons at the smith. It would take awhile for the preists to prepare thier equipment, Jordan couldnt say why since elves were quite mysterious about the staffs and slaves their preists used in combat to heal soliders. They would rest in the extra quarters of the fort, and tomorrow, begin their attack against the undead.

Finally, early the next morning the troop moved out. Their first goal was to reach a village further north, and begin their investigation from there. The road there was open and no signs of recent travel or fighting were found on them. They reached the town after a short march, and found it empty. Apon closer inspection trails of blood and weapons lying on the ground were to be seen, but nowhere in the entire town was a soul to be found.

Kalin sat on a bench, pondering this mystery. Why bring the bodies of the dead away? Prehaps they were buried in some graveyard, and the rest the townsfolk fled in fear. He looked over the unit he was working with. It was some two hundred and fifty men, about two companies. The attack on the fort had been counted at about one hundred invaders, but the captain had also said more were pouring through the forest when they had turned abd retreated.

"Kalin! We are moving on!" called another paladin. Kalin looked up, nodded, and joined the group.
It continued so the rest of the day. They visited three towns, only to find each empty. The set up camp in the courtyard of the last town for the night.
"Do any of you understand this?" asked Jordan. The other mumured answers that led to believe they were equally confused. Kalin however had an idea.
"They are supposedly undead, correct?" the others answered yes. "Prehaps they are using the corpses of the villagers." The others were puzzled for a moment at this thought, but their faces showed the horror of knowing what he meant after a moments thought.
"If this is true, we must stop them now." exclaimed another, almost in panic.
"Somehow, i believe they will come find us," said Jordan.

Few of the soliders slept that night, sure that the enemy would come to them in the darkness. The sound of disturbed animals and breaking of wood in the thicket of the nearby forests made them believe they were being watched. However, the eyes of the undead made no sound, and had been with them since before they left the fort. That night no attack was started, but forces were being gathered to attack.

The next day the group set out to the next city, a fortified place called Haral. A large garrison had been stationed there before the plague began, and the paladins hoped they had held out.

***** ***** ***** *****

Erza, servant of Ner'zhul watched the soliders move toward the city through the eyes of his servants. He knew they where they were heading to. He commanded his forces to hold back, and allow them to move through the lines. He would await their arrival in the city, and then kill them all in one attack.
The lich smiled. Everything was going as had been planned.

***** ***** ***** *****

The group reached the city a short time later, once again without incident, although the feeling of being watched was growing stronger with every moment that passed. Something was not right.
They breathed a sigh of relief at the sight of the city walls, tall stone walls with towers, an old fortress of the orc wars. Jordan and Kalin alike smiled at the sight of watchmen and elven bowmen above the gate. The guards seem startled at first seeing the group, but a call was sent through the city afterwards, and the alarm bells were not sounded.
The small army moved into the city, and the paladins were immediatly greeted by the commander of the city's considerable garrison.
"Thank the light, reinforcements at last!" exclaimed the commander, the relief in his eyes was as visible as that of a starving man who had finally found something to eat.
"Reinforcements?" asked Jordan, confused. "We have not recieved any calls for help, in fact, we have not heard anything for this region for a long time. That is why we are here, to find out what is happening."
"You have heard nothing? You know nothing of the siege we are under? But, that makes no sense! How did you break through the enemy lines?" asked the commander, who was even more confused.
"Siege? Enemy lines? We have encountered no enemies on the way here," said Jordan, suddenly feeling very uneasy. Something was very wrong here...

The two men had no chance to continue their conversation, as the alarms of the city were sound at that moment. Jordan and the commander ran up the stairs onto the city wall, to see a sight of pure horror. Masses of the gangly creatures that had attacked the fort were coming out of the forest, massing the clearing just outside of the range of the cities siege machinery. The enemy was also rolling what seemed to be catapults into the clearing from the road. The commander yelled out for all men to man their posts, and ran off to see to the defense of the city. The paladins yelled out commands, ordering their men to gather in the courtyard behind the gate.

Jordan quickly attempted to estimate their strength. They had brought some hundred fifty men, plus the city's garrison came to maybe six hundred men. Elven archers were in the garrison, along with dwarves who manned the siege contraptions they had probably invented the night before. The walls of the city, and the gate were sturdy, but could not repel the enemy for long by themselves. The numbers of the enemy seemed endless, but he had not seen how they wished to overcome the defenses of the city.
The enemy catapults had come into posistion, and almost at once opened fire, launching projectiles over the city walls. To the terror of the defenders, they flung not rock or stone, but organic material. The corpses, legs, arms, heads and torsos of man and beast flew into the city, exploding on impact. An unnatural green cloud rose from them, and the defenders at once fled from it, knowing it was most likely toxic, probably through magical means. Some of the bodies flew over the walls, some exploding against or on them, and fear grew, despite the trained bravery of the soliders of the Alliance.
The preists began their work. Using Elven magic, they forced the toxic clouds to dispurse, allowing the guards to re-take their posts. The first stage of the undead attack was repelled with only few victums. Only seven men were injured, all through direct hits from the flying corpses. The clouds themselves did nothing.
The undead however, seeing their first tactic was showing little promise of results, changed their strategy quickly. Several battering rams were moved up, and began slowing moving without any force being exerated on them towards the city gate. The ranks of creatures moved in unison with them, slowly, ever so slowly moving toward the walls.
The commander of the city watched the enemy draw towards them. He estimated the distance they had to come within before the archers or dwarven mortar teams could open fire. So they waited, and watched the still somewhat too far off army approach.
Jordan called his soliders to form up behind the gate. He had no doubt the enemy would be able to break through the gate. He hoped only they would fare so well as the men had at the fort.
The enemy was now close enough, and the commander ordered the dwarves to open fire. The short warriors dropped hallow metal shells, filled with explosives, into long tubes only for them to fire right back out again, flying over walls and lobbing into the enemy ranks. The projectiles exploded on impact with the ground, sending creatures standing near the impact point flying in all directions. Others that were further away were injured by the sharpnel from the explosions, but they moved on, despite some losing an arm or leg. It was as if they felt no pain, or had no care of the fact they were mortally hurt.
The monsters moved with great speed towards the town gates, suffering great losses on the way. Arrows rained down on them, and the mortars continued to fly over the walls out into the fields infront of the city. Arrows were lit on fire and used to burn the advancing battering rams, but without having anyone pushing them, it seemed a hopeless endevour. The rams were drawing ever closer to gate, and there was no way to stop them. Jordan's soliders formed behind the gate, and prepared for the onslaught to come, as the ram began pounding against the thick wood....

***** ******* *******

Daniel stood up, dazed and confused. He looked around, not surprised in seeing the encampment of the undead. The confusion left him, and he accepted what had happened. He wasn't that what he was before. Ner'zhul had remade him. He lived now only to serve the lich-king, not some petty king of some kingdom that was going to fall anyway.
He looked around, and saw a smaller man in a hooded cloak approach him.
"Greetings, Master. I assume you know the prince's wishes?" asked the cultist. Daniel looked apon him, and wondered if he had been taken, or had gave himself willingly. He quickly tossed the thought aside, knowing fully it was unimportant.
"The army must move," he said finally.
"Our goal, master?" asked the cultist patiently, this was the second Deathknight he had seen brought back, or rather, not let go.
"We move to the south, to Dalaran."

Vaulander
06-09-2004, 01:43 PM
Very nicely done, mate.
V.

Abuse.Craft
06-11-2004, 02:04 AM
Maybe it's just me but there is too much dialogue, and not enough action. Reminds me of cheap, poorly-done anime. >_<

JackVance
06-11-2004, 08:31 PM
Hope you can take some constructive criticism but the start with all the dialogue didn't really make for a good read so I quit there TT.

Abuse.Craft
06-12-2004, 12:32 AM
Lol, JV, I agree wit you. I skimmed it... too much dialogue all the way through.

King.Nightshade
06-12-2004, 04:31 PM
*sigh* I cant help it...TOO LONG DIDN'T READ!!!!

Actually, I lied, I read a lot of it. I like it, nice job :)

Allied
06-19-2004, 03:20 AM
Hope you can take some constructive criticism but the start with all the dialogue didn't really make for a good read so I quit there TT.
The dialoge makes up for about half the story, and if half a page of conversation is too much for you, i dont know...

i will try to shorten it in the next chapter...

a anime? arent those cartoons? how can you compare a written story to animated drawings?

steinkalv
09-09-2004, 11:12 AM
nice

Abuse.Craft
09-09-2004, 05:17 PM
Allied, the plot from the story reminds me of an anime, poorly done. Typically bad anime includes excessive dialogue (just look at DBZ as example)

dN-Wake
09-09-2004, 09:17 PM
feel asleep after the 2nd paragraph

JuGGaNauT
09-09-2004, 09:23 PM
;) :cool: cool story. :cool2: ;)

very secksy indeed.

Sir.Scrooge
09-15-2004, 06:17 PM
awesome story :D keep up the good work!!