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Unread 03-31-2012, 11:35 AM   #1
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The main character in this piece of fictional prose is a musician who suffers from severe paranoid schizophrenia. Disclaimer: this is 100% pure fictional word art.


"static." They're coming.

Press play.

Shut down.

Tune out.

Tune in.

Some heavenly melody graces my ears, with artificial intelligence overtones but its acceptable. It is 2012 after all. It weaves and progresses and I begin to let go.
Time moves on the Youtube bar, but quite slowly. This lifetime will only be three for four minutes, I can handle it.

Slow breakdown. The angels start to cry.


Shit. Where am I?

(you're inside your brain, let go man)



It hurts.

(just let go)


Sanity is being sucked out of the center of my brain, replaced by a titanium drill that wants to inject its digitized toxins in me. Its will is strong. My walls are stronger. I will simply observe because I know this demonic entity cannot defeat my will no matter how hard it tries.

The frequencies created by this machine are exponentially stronger than any stories of Hell I was told as a child. Is Hell following me? I've seen it in my mind at the mental hospital. Even if it is following me in the form of these frequencies, it can't win. I'm a musician. I play instruments. I am not a digitized demon trying to mindfuck the youth.

The fear escalates. Enter survival mode.

Press stop.

Shut up.

Tune out.

I'm shaken but I'm still here. I've felt enough. It taught me what I need to know.

Subconsciously I thank the Devil for not taking me so soon. My will prevailed. Maybe I don't have to visit the Crossroads after all.

27 is a lifetime but so is 111.

Thank you, Jimi.

So long, dubstep. Goodbye past.
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Unread 04-01-2012, 09:17 PM   #2
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[0:21]-JuSSioN: imbalanced orc lol
[0:29]-WemadeFOX_Lyn: y
[0:41]-JuSSioN: gogo play fair
[0:43]-JuSSioN: no bm
[0:56]-WemadeFOX_Lyn :who else?:D
[1:00]-JuSSioN: fs ofc
[1:04]-WemadeFOX_Lyn: noo
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Unread 04-03-2012, 07:05 AM   #3
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well written, liked it
When you look into an abyss, the abyss also looks into you. ~Friedrich Nietzche

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Unread 04-03-2012, 10:06 AM   #4
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i have no idea what I just read

would read again
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LOL nice shit. 10/10
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Unread 04-03-2012, 06:48 PM   #7
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This is actually 100% what my ears hear when I listen to dubstep. End result is always: WTF.
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Unread 04-06-2012, 10:28 PM   #8
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Thanks for the reviews. It's like spiritual sci-fi or something, so I like the "WTF" reaction hehe =)
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Unread 04-07-2012, 12:43 AM   #9
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i'm a dubstep lover.

but this post made me fckn lol
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Unread 04-30-2012, 10:11 PM   #10
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I enjoyed this representation of a schizophrenic on dubstep. I'm sure his psychiatrist would prefer he listen to something more soothing to help stop the demons... This also made me want to use onomatopoeia more.
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