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    Starry Fluorescence - Poem

    Starry eyes shine into the Hyperspatial Cosmos
    A being of light and beauty
    Mistaken by most, not All
    I resolve with the strings of Delta

    They slaved, were whipped and chained
    They died, guitarists fired
    And yet they sang a tune so Blue
    even the cosmos cried

    For the Delta

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    What is this about, I want to like it and I have a feeling I may, the only thing I would comment on is that hyperspatial is an unnecessary word in there
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