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    100 Point Level Doobz's Avatar
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    What is justice?

    I feel this rage,
    Burning inside me.
    I cant control it.
    It consumes me.
    Everytime i think;
    It makes my mind twist,
    it makes my body twitch,
    it makes my soul pitch
    out, because everyone is frail.
    I mean i got friends who are about to go to jail.
    And there is noone capable to pay their bail.
    If this is justice;
    Then i wish i never cared,
    i wish there was no right,
    i wish there was only wrong.
    Because justice like this.
    I may aswell be smoking out a bong,
    judge says its the way it rolls,
    i say its not there fault you put them in a house like trolls.
    You never let a hand out,
    never tried to help them out,
    never looked at them as somone to consider or contest in a bout.
    How is that person gonna make themselves?
    How will they express themselves?
    How are they supposed to succeed, i mean WHAT ELSE?
    Every minute you say yourself,
    what you need to do to embrace passion,
    gods will and everything is that just for fashion?
    Every minute you show your face,
    my hands just begin to pick up pace,
    i wanna just knock you out, and leave you without a trace.
    People around me are only trying to embrace,
    the little hope they got left.
    They are trying to continue even on there very last breath

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    is it rap music yo yo ?

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    somewhat yea. I draw inspiration from anything really. I feel rap music has ingenious ways of rhythem and flow so i use them as reference. But i only do it to help improve my own natural flow when writing so when i need to write more serious "not spur of the moment emotions" i can have that natural taste of flow. Also not only this but i feel the flow they use is the best way "if its natural" to get deep insight and passion into my work.

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    well at least you justify it with reason
    i also find musical roots for rhythm in poetry
    i play piano, a bit of the acoustic, once a choir boy and thus i've never had to stick to meter or anything tin poetry yet i always manage to implement a strong sense of rhythm
    i think changes in rhythm and pace dynamics (sound and consonant change also) can be manipulated for potent emotional effect
    unfortunate that these subtleties are overlooked in academic english studies

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