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    dead world

    DEAD WORLD
    by Gerard Aitken

    a once bold and molten phoenix
    melted to another cog in a chain
    what point is there to this sick confusion
    wherein lies the problem you can't name
    to what degree of a soul so battered and bruised
    can be fixed and mended so it can still remain

    you exist and decide
    you decease and divide
    many failed designs
    mass work built on lies
    shed sweat, lost blood
    forgotten tears
    and wasted lives

    where you've been
    is where you are now
    two steps that way
    and four steps back
    nothing makes sense here
    there is nothing left anywhere and
    there was never anything to begin with

    grass fed churchgoers and cannibals
    subconscious in a rigormortik march
    steel spines and juggernauts
    scorched by time and left to rot
    one more tragedy for a fable
    that confused the villains for the plot

    paradise is over before it ever began
    a sea of clouds is all that breathes
    distorted and lost in your abstract world
    dead is the earth
    under a thousand dead stars

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    hope it comes off as friendly, i wrote it as i was playing with kittens

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    If you dont know this site. Its a very good one

    poems-and-quotes.com

    I bet you would enjoy it

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    thx, it's really neat

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    im
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